满怀自信为主题的作文:高考命题作文,77Rules

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Unit 77 Rules for Making Friends

请以“Rules for Making Friends”为题写一篇100字左右的短文

“范文”

Rules for Making Friends

As a proverb goes, “We can judge a man by① the company② he keeps”. So, it is very important to keep good company.

A good friend is someone who can be with you whenever③ you need him. They are there when things are good and are also there when things are bad. To choose a friend, you have to choose someone who has the same interests as you have. As a friend help you in your time of difficulty④, you must also help him in his hour of need.

As the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”⑤

“注释:”

①judge sb/ sth by (from) ……:根据……判断某人或某物

②company:伙伴

③whenever:无论何时

④in one’s time of difficulty:在某人有困难的时候

⑤A friend in need is a friend indeed:患难见真交

“点评:”

这是一篇根据命题展开的说明文。本文话题与每个人都悉悉相关,因为人人都需要朋友,这也的确是大家关注的一个话题。那么应该结交什么样的朋友呢?

文章共三段,第一段作者引用了一个谚语“We can judge a man by the company he keeps”来说明一个道理,即交一位好的伙伴的重要性。

第二段作者首先对什么是“a good friend”发表了自己的看法,进而阐述了应怎样择友。作者认为,真正的好朋友应同甘共苦,互相帮助。

最后作者又引用了一句古谚语:“患难见真交”来结束全文,画龙点睛,呼应了主题。

本文结构完整,说理透彻,语言浅显易懂,行文流畅,两次引用谚语,恰到好处,为文章增色不少。

资料来源:英语作文高分必背丛书:高考/李华田主编,武汉大学出版社,2005

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