六级写作是提分最容易的模块，看看，多了解六级写作才能拿高分。 一、篇章连贯 可以通过文章内容的内在联系来表现篇章的连贯性。 1、具体到一般： 表现形式为先举例具体的事例进行分析、说明，进而得出论证或结论，在段末往往以主题句的形式表现出来。 2、一般到具体：表现为在文章段首以主题句的形式出现，然后通过具体的叙述、说明、举例使主题句变得具体、明白、易懂。 二、 常用句型 １、 开头 It's well known to us that... Recently,... has been brought to popular attention/has become the focus of public concern. One of the universal issues we are faced with / that cause increasing concern is that... People's view/opinions /ideas on ... vary from person to person.Some people think that ... they hold this opinion because... However,others hold that... 2、主要论述方法 A is to B what C is to D According to ..., but there is no evidence whatsoever to show... The example cited,while suggestive of these trends,is insufficient to warrant their truth because there is no reason to believe that the data drawn form... is representative of... As it stands, this argument suffers from three critical flaws. 3、结尾 In my opinion,it is more advisable to do ... than to do Taking into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion that... It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of... We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with It is high time that we put an end to... Otherwise,... 4、开篇句 1 Recently, sth./the problem of...has been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern. A e.g. Recently, the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter. 2 One of the universal issues we are faced with/that cause increasing concern is that... e.g. One of the universal issues that draw cause growing concern is whether it is wise of man to have invented the automobile. 3 It is a traditional practice to...in our society. e.g. It is a traditional practice for young people to be financially dependent on their parents for anything like marriage and housing. 4 When it comes to... sth., most people the public maintains/contends that... 5 A public debate has arisen as to/over/concerning... e.g. A public debate has arisen as to whether one should step forward bravely in the event of crime. 6 Once in a newspaper/magazine, I hit upon the report that... e.g. Once in a newspaper, I hit upon the news that a quick witted policeman spotted a suspect's spittle in the street blottedit up and ran a DNA test on it which led to the man's arrest for a murder. This case best counts as a practical application of the DNA technique. 三、高分作文标志 1：是否长短句交叉； 2、是否会使用插入语； 3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。 四、写作常用方法 1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I 比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicableapproaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness提高某物竞争力 五、30个最经典的替换词 1.individuals,characters, folks替换people ,persons 2: positive, favorable, rosy 美好的，promising 有希望的，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill 有害的替换bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换 eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result,they find their academic records are less impressive. 沪江四六级 4.an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most替换many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替换most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that替think 因为是书面语，所以要加that 7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing 8: shared 代 common 9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits 10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion 11:Increasingly,growing 替换more and more 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly 13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer 15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very 16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in 18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.沪 19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect 20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear 21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause. 22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth 23.desire 替换want. 24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替换remember 26. enjoy, possess 替换have注意process是过程的意思 27. interaction替换communication 28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible 六、常用优秀词组 1. 随着经济的繁荣 with the booming of the economy 2. 随着人民生活水平的显著提高 with the remarkable improvement of people's living standard 3. 先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology 4. 为我们日常生活增添了情趣 add much spice / flavor to our daily life 5. 人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed that… 6. 我同意前者后者观点 I give my vote to the former / latter opinion. 7. 引起了广泛的公众关注 Sth. has aroused wide public concern. / Sth has drawn great public attention. 8. 不可否认 It is undeniable that… 9. 热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion / debate 10. 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue 11. 就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally, 12. 有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons 13. 双方的论点 argument on both sides 14. 发挥日益重要作用 play an increasingly important role in… 15. 对…必不可少 be indispensable to … 16. 正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes: 17. 对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive / negative effects on… 18. 利远远大于弊 The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. 19. 导致，引起 lead to / give rise to / contribute to / result in 20. 复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon 21. 责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility / achievement 22. 竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation 23. 开阔眼界 widen one's horizon / broaden one's vision 24. 学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills 25. 经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden 26. 考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into consideration 27. 从另一个角度 from another perspective 28. 做出共同努力 make joint efforts 29. 对…有益 be beneficial to / be conducive to… 30. 为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society 31. 打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for… 32. 综合素质 comprehensive quality 33. 致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to… 34. 应当承认 Admittedly, 35. 不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty 36. 满足需求 satisfy / meet the needs of... 37. 可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information 38. 宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources 39. 因特网 the Internet 一定要由冠词，字母I 大写 40. 方便快捷 convenient and efficient 41. 在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life 42. 环保的材料 environmentally friendly materials 43. 社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress 44. 大大方便了人们的生活 Sth has greatly facilitated people's lives. 45. 对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue 46. 在一定程度上 to some extent 47. 理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice 48. …必然趋势 an irresistible trend of… 49. 日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly keen social competition 50. 眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest 51. 长远利益 long-tem interest 52. …有其自身的优缺点 … has its own merits and demerits / pros and cons 53. 对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to / be detrimental to 54. 交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas / emotions / information 55. 跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / keep abreast with the latest development of… 56. …的健康发展 the healthy development of… 57. 重视 attach great importance to… 58. 社会地位 social status 59. 把时间和精力放在…上 focus one's time and energy on… 60. 扩大知识面 expand one's scope of knowledge 61. 身心两方面 both physically and mentally 62. 有直接/间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to… 63. 导致很多问题 give rise to / lead to / spell various problems 64. 可以替代think的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion / belief / view that 65. 缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress / burden 66. 优先考虑/发展… give top priority to sth. 67. 与…比较 compared with…/ in comparison with 68. 可降解的/可分解的材料 degradable / decomposable material 69. 代替 replace / substitute / take the place of 70. 提供就业机会 offer job opportunities 71. 反映了社会进步的 mirror the social progress/advance 72. 增进相互了解 enhance / promote mutual understanding 73. 充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of 74. 承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure 75. 保障社会稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society 76. 更多地强调 put more emphasis on… 77. 适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the social development 78. 实现梦想 realize one's dream 79. 主要理由列举如下 The main / leading reasons are listed as follows: 80. 我们还有很长的路要走 We still have a long way to go. 七、文章主体段落三大杀手锏 一、举实例 思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！ In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance,to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her. 更多句型： To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example 二、做比较 方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的； 世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（through comparison）和不同点（through contrast）。下面是一些短语： 相似的比较： in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, … 三、换言之 没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。 实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you! I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you. I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you. 或者上面我们举过的例子： I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it. 因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it. 更多短语：in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply 世博会英语作文 2010年我的世博会 The World Expo is a large-scale, global, non-commercial Expo. The hosting of the World Expo must be applied for by a country and approved by the international World Expo committee. Expo aimsto promote the exchange of ideas and development of the world economy, culture, science and technology, to allow exhibitors to publicise and display their achievements and improve internationalrelationships. Accordingly, the World Expo with its 150-year history is regarded as the Olympic Games of the economy, science and technology. Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The WorldExpo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. Our government has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, asa host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more.
